Drawing Final

This is my final for Joe's drawing class. The theme was "the salty mermaid gang of sausage flats". I decided that sausage flats would be an apartment complex in a bad part of London during the 80's and that the gang would be mermaid-man punks who listen to the Sex Pistols and The Clash.

Mignola Emulation

I did this for the third week of the emulation project in character design class.

I was waiting to post it until I had a chance to color it but I decided that wouldn't necessarily make it look better or more accurate to the style I'm trying to copy.

What do you think? How far off the mark am I?